Beaulah Conaghan
Thursday, July 21, 2011
How can I re-write this sentence?
There is nothing wrong with it being long if you can't find another way to express it. If you really want to cut it up, I say do it in the 3rd line. For example, ...to the average citizen. They should also make the "right"...
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