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The story “Rip Van Winkle” expresses the fact that effort has to be exerted towards a goal in order to obtain it. A magical setting helps create an unworldly goal that is constantly gleaming in the distance while the characterization of the people change to reach their burning desire of freedom, and symbolism throughout the story foreshadows the outcome for both America and Rip Van Winkle. In conclusion, this story shows that obstacles have to be overcome and attention has to be given to that which is needed to allow prosperity, freedom, and liberty to grow and prosper in the deserved region, or heart.